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    Default Poems you never Shared

    I don't know if this is the right place to post this, but it was the closest I could get to finding a proper section.

    I will start it off by sharing a Poem I had written for the one I love.

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    The end has come, the end has gone
    A new beginning brought a new dawn
    A fresh start to rebuild and make right
    All the things we never want to recite
    We connect and we share more than before
    Yet there is still a gap and the wound is still sore
    Not willing to fight for us one last time
    Now the pain is only and solely mine
    I wished and I hoped and I fought so hard
    Now my heart is alone and eternally scarred
    The things I wanted to experience and share with you
    No chance at all, because the situation is through
    My heart cries, and howls at night
    For one little spark to make the flame ignite
    When the wood is wet, the fire does not burn
    As it stands now, this is not your concern
    This is my reality and the pain is my own
    Once again I find myself staring into the great unknown

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    THat is beautiful. This is one I wrote.

    The darkness of this pain whispers to me through sorrowfull tears
    My heart is shattered, dreams gone and I'm left to confront my worst fears

    Forget you I must and attempt to rediscover the me that yesterday lived in the light
    You are my torment, your memory imprisons my emotions which agaist them I fight
    Oh to be quiet, unfeeling and entertain the sweet emtiness of the void for but a moment in time
    Maybe to sustain mindless slumber,a sigh of relief from the pain I could find
    Be gone enemy who threatens my sanity and calm, enough of this jail from which no escape
    You have won this round as I struggle to prevent this love my spirit to break
    I gave you all , my vunerability, my passion and heart you held in your hands from the start
    You trampled my emotions and crushed my soul the day you said we should part
    Listen to the thunder of this silence in which you once lived and now is a painful abyss
    I taste the bitter tears that race down over my aching lips you once softly kissed...

    WITHOUT YOU

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    I am the man who has opened his eyes
    has seen all the issues, behind all the lies
    I am the man who's life has changed course
    yet I have been cast out, without any remorse
    I am the man who still so wants to try
    yet all you will say is "whatever, goodbye"
    I am the man who who begged and pleaded
    who's honest words were heard but unheeded
    I am the man who has nothing to gain
    who's attempts to make right are causing such pain
    I am the man who cannot give in
    and friends' kind words will be taken on chin
    I am the man who's a lost little lamb
    and you are the woman yet you don't give a damn

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    hey these are such nice poems and i think this is the best place to post it here ,
    "I am the man who has opened his eyes" i like most among these three , its not mean other are bad everyone are very touching and goes very deep .
    Last edited by Dan72; 08-12-2011 at 04:46 AM. Reason: Links not allowed

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