wow just wow... wonderful writing...
There are no magic endings I am afraid. No loose endings neatly packaged into tiny bows. Instead we are left with questions that have no answers.
I started this small short story recently and then realized halfway through that it was about the death of our relationship. I wish you could read it, and maybe someday you will. But I have given away that hope, to find hope for myself.
Great Closure Letter Geoff,
Its a sad feeling when you can look back and point out things that was the begining of the end of your life together.When i also look back there were red flags that now i should have been aware of and you somtimes wish you could go back and correct them or be two steps ahead to correct them, but hey we are only human.
Amazing and well written story Geoff i enjoyed reading it,a good insight into your pain and your love for her at the end of the day its her loss and anothers gain.
Your Friend Stephen.
Thanks Stephen: Ya to look back, you say wow. The weight thing is a true thing. It had happened and had been discussed that it happened during breakups, not y just that it had. And not tons just an extra 8-10 pounds -rather apparent on a slender frame.
And when I wrote the story I had to actually confront the fact that indeed this was yet another red flag.
And I find it weird and wonder if the reasoning I wrote in the story is true.
Would the brain actually unconsiously(sp) send out chemicals to the body to appear more fertile if it sensed that the body it controlled was soon to be available?
Actually ha ha it kinda fascinates me.
Life is weird.;)
Thanks bro hope everything is good.
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